Deranged-Productions's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[ASCII Animation]

Mkay... how?

I can see it being time-consuming if you just used one textbox... but this was basically a bunch of tweens across the screen of various textboxes... So really, there was no real difference from more regular animation, except this was.. huh...

It's an interesting idea, sure, but...

KyleDaFox responds:

There were very few tweens. Mostly FBF. There's a big difference between regular animation and this, it is letters, the animation is letterrs, there is nothing that is drawn, just letters, very few tweens, FBF.

[B-S fanfic-short]

See, now this was ACTUALLY funny.

Sure, it was cheaply made, no sound (which is really where all the punch comes from) and a ripoff of someone else's work, essentially... But it was actually funny. All you retarded people who rip off Bonus Stage and try and pimp it at the cost of all humor could learn something here.

HAM-Mosessess responds:

It's edu-freakin-tainment is what this is.

[A Quick Sprite Tutorial]

Okay, sure, why not.

Ahh, I remember the good old days, when you actually had to be good at something to make a tutorial on it. Sadly, times have changed.

Oh, and yes, I did notice the major problem with the movie. It blew.

Now, what you should do is actually use more than one sprite. And don't interchange them haphazardly. You've got one sprite of Sonic running, like a paper cutout, then he goes up and then you use one frame again, but it's a different sprite from a different game. This leads me to assume that not only were you too lazy to make a movieclip of running, you were too lazy to bother ensuring it was the same sprite sheet. That, and a total overuse of the very lazily done transformations. And the text was jerky and some was on for too little time to read. Essentially, it was unpleasant.

I can see what you're trying to do by helping people, and I commend you for it. Thing is, you generally have to be better than that before it'll do any good.

Zornkatzu responds:

Ok. I'm going to clear up one thing about the movie. That sprite movie was made when I was first introduced to flash. At that time, I didn't even know what a movie clip was. I used that sorry excuse of a sprite movie, to help show people what NOT to do.

Now, about the Sonic sprite, your correct I didn't use a movie clip as I should have. Why? Because when this was made, I didn't know how at the time of its creation.

However, I believe you are mistaken about the sprites. When Sonic is running, then goes up a hill and continues, it is indeed the same sprite. If you are referring to the motion tween portion of the tutorial, then you are correct. I lost the original sheet, and since it was simply a run through anyhow, I used a sprite from the other sheet I had.

I believe you were very blunt in your review, however I thank you for speaking your mind. And yes, my next flash will be much, much better.

~ Mitsubishi

[Loud Noises Collab 2]

HAHAHA

When the dinosaur guy came up (Can't remember his name but the show was doomed to fail anyway) that was the funniest damn thing in the history of time.

ThreeStar responds:

The show's name was Dinosaurs... and I'm pretty sure the dinosaur dad was named... Earl?

Anyway, glad you liked it. We had fun making it. ;D

Three

[Non-Canonical Joke Minute]

Jeezum crow what the hell's wrong wi' this audienc

The thing was perfect, and I can't believe everyone here is stupid enough to have not gotten the joke. I gave it a 10 for violence and interactivity automatically because well... it's a movie, not a game, violence is unnecessary and interactivity is stupid, ALTHOUGH you still did have a good idea with the keyboard thing. Humor 10, drunk scots are always funny, and the second one, y'gotta think about it for a second but it's funny as hell. Graphics 10, I have not EVER seen a flash animation with this level of detail WHILE STILL KEEPING A VERY HIGH LEVEL OF ANIMATION QUALITY. Style 10. heh ehehehehehehehhhhh....

Sound, perfectly fits so 9. Overall 10, I doubt I will ever see an animation made in flash of this caliber again, I mean I seriously thought for a second it was TV. TEACH ME HOW TO DRAW!! PLEASE!! MAINLY CLOTHING FOLDS!! Not jk, I need help bad.

touched responds:

Thanx for the compliments. ^^ I'm pretty weak with clothing folds, actually. There are tutorials on the web here and there that deal with it better than I could.